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May 5, 2010 12:53 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
May 4, 2010 12:55 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
May 4, 2010 12:00 pm nh8jeann nh8jeann "Nothing is tied together. You need transitions as well as keeping same thoughts together within paragraphs. Very confusing. No expert opinions. Very little evidence of effort."
May 3, 2010 12:53 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
May 3, 2010 12:50 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
May 3, 2010 12:39 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
Apr 26, 2010 12:45 pm nh8mattb1 nh8mattb1 "how do u spell mamal wrong and been u spelt as bin"
Apr 26, 2010 12:44 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
Apr 23, 2010 12:58 pm nh8jeann nh8jeann
Apr 23, 2010 12:50 pm nh8mitchells nh8mitchells
Apr 23, 2010 12:39 pm nh8jeann nh8jeann "more research and info needed"